Wednesday, September 3, 2008

liL mUtZ fiRsT poEmz

I saw that it was space,
When I was gliding through the stars.
And looking for some planets,
Just for driving all my cars.

I’ve searched and searched for hours,
But I couldn’t find a thing.
And I was gliding through the stars,
With my wishful, wonderful wings.

I found a planet that was round,
It looked so big and had some brown.
Yellow added on to it,
Made it look like a cool town.

I went to go and play on it,
And then I looked behind.
I looked behind this giant rock,
I didn’t know what I would find.

It was big and beautiful,
And didn’t know what it was.
It giant four arms,
And I saw what it does.

2 comments:

Miss W said...

Not a bad poem Mata - I want you to think about the metre the poem has especially during the middle part of the poem.

Mizz lil cutie said...

sup n.s lmao far nice page t.s.b.b hahahahhahahahahaha