Monday, October 27, 2008

INSTRUCTIONAL WRITTING



HOW TO HAVE A BORING JOURNEY


1. Get up in the morning and then have a shower

2. After having a shower, dry yourself clean then get changed

3. When you finished getting changed, get all your things ready, have something to eat before you lock the house up.

4. Walk to your car, (once you have locked the front door) then open the door and jump into your car.

5. Turn the key and you car will start

6. After starting your car, drive down the driveway and then drive onto the road

7. Drive slowly on the road and follow the signs (because it will give you directions to where you want to go.)

8. After following all the directions to your grandma’s house.

9. Drive up the driveway, and then turn your car off.

1o. Jump out of your car and lock it up then knock on the door. When you finished knocking at the door, your grandma should answer it.

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?
Your grandma will open the door and say hello to you, then you both go inside and talk about things like ‘what’s been happening lately. Then your grandma will start cooking dinner for the both of you.

Wednesday, September 24, 2008

LiL mUtZ fIrSt PoEmZ

I saw that it was space,
When I was gliding through the stars.
And looking for some planets,
Just for driving all my cars.

I’ve searched and searched for hours,
But I couldn’t find a thing.
And I was gliding through the stars,
With my wishful, wonderful wings.

I found a planet that was round,
It looked so big and had some brown.
Yellow added on to it,
Made it look like a cool town.

I went to go and play on it,
And then I looked behind.
I looked behind this giant rock,
I didn’t know what I would find.

It was big and beautiful,
And didn’t know what it was.
It giant four arms,
And I saw what it does.

The Villian In the Story Of Jack And The BeanStalk


As I think about it, Jack is the villian in the Jack and the beanstalk story he stole the hen that laid golden eggs from the giant and ran away with it. Even though he was poor and had no food at all, the mother of Jack was no-where to be seen that day Jack climbed up the beanstalk and stole the hen.

Jack's mother told Jack to sell the cow for some money so they could buy something to eat. Jack swapped the cow for some magic beans from an old man.When Jack went back to his house to show his mother the beans, she got mad and angry and threw the beans away, and the next morning there was a beanstalk outside and Jack went to climb it without thinking about his saftey. As he got up to the top of the beanstalk, he saw a humongous door and snuck in the door, saw the giant sleeping and ran to the hen and stolle it. Then he ran off with it showing no respect.

The giant was trying to save his hen, because it was his favourite and the beautiful golden harp was warning about them being robbed. The Giant was sleeping and got a rude awakening from his harp, then he chased Jack to the beanstalk. The Giant climbed down the beanstalk chasing Jack and the hen. But as soon as he gat down, Jacks mother chopped down the beanstalk with an axe. She was holding a weapon and killed the giant with it so he couldn't get back up.

For conclusion,I think Jack and his mother are the villians in the story of Jack and the beanstalk. Jack stole the hen when he should have asked the Giant first and he he should have not ran away with it. Jack and his mother are stealer's and thieve's. They show no remorce to what they did to the giant.

Tuesday, September 23, 2008

RUSTAFARIAN POEM


YELLOW IS THE SUN THAT SHINES ON HIS GRAVE,
RED IS THE BLOOD THAT RUN THROUGH HIS VEINS,
GREEN IS THE TREES THAT SURROUND HIM BEFORE HE DIED,
BLACK IS BOB MARLEY NO WOMAN NO CRY.

I WROTE THIS POEM BECAUSE HE WAS A FAMOUS PERSON WHO WAS A JAMAICAN. HE WAS A RASTAFARIAN AS WELL, AND HE LIKES REGGAE AND FEATURED WITH OTHER FAMOUS PEOPLE TOO.

THIS IS SAYING THAT ALL FAMOUS PEOPLE WONT LIVE FOR EVER TO SEEK THE FUTURE, AND A RHYME TO DESCRIBE THIS PERSON AND HIS GRAVE.

MY POEM IS A RIDDLE AND A TONGUE TWISTER TOO.

Thursday, September 18, 2008

NIGHT MARES

I woke up early hours,
In the morning feeling scared.
My brother fell right out
Of his high sky towered bed.

I didn’t know why,
And I didn’t really care.
But when he suddenly woke up,
He said ‘don’t you do your dare’.

I went outside and started to
Look up at the dark, blue skies,
And at the same time, I was
Thinking of some beautiful birds
That will go past flying by.

THE MOST IMPORTANT LEADER

There are lots of leaders around the world that are important and influential, but there is one person that I think is important and influential and that does good things for his family and other people. He is my dad. My dad has helped and lead a lot of people that he doesn't know and they were bad but when my dad helped and lead them, they've changed to good and got jobs and did did good things to others to help. He respects people and the help that my dad gives people, they help him back.

My dad helps you if you're struggling with things and it's good that he helps you because you will see what a respectful and helpful man he is. He has lead other people that he doesn't know to good things and he he just hasn't just helped and lead other people, he did these things to our family as well and they all appreciate it. My dad got my older brothers of he streets and he lead them and now they appreciate what he has done for them because now they have their own houses and have their own job and family.

He, my dad will do anything to help stay good and to stay a leader. He did some bad things when he was little and didn't learn from it till he was older, and the only person that lead him to learn from his mistakes was his dad, my grandpa. My dad will tell great stories that he was told by his dad and from his dad about leaders. My grandpa and my great grandpa were great leaders that lead our family to do good things and go to good places. My dad always tells these stories and how he leads others too.

My dad is fantastic at drawing moko's which means Maori patterns and he is fabulous at keeping you active. When you're active he plays games with you like marching, Simon's said and other games. when he's leading you, he makes you do lots and lots of fun things and you wont want to stop doing it. At the same time you're learning from him too, and when you grow up you'll want to be like him that leads others by doing good and fun things.

For conclusion i have lots of fantabulous and wonderful about my dad but I broke it down to a few fabulous things he does to be and as a leader. He's fun and he'll teach you good things and does good things for you, just like a real leader would do. My dad is like a real leader but to me, I think he is a leader and the most important leader that I'll need in the whole world. That's why I think my dad is the most important leader.

Tuesday, September 16, 2008

TERM 4 GOALS

READING:MY READING GOALS IS TO THINK DEEPER ABOUT THE STORY WHILE I'M READING AND TO UNDERSTAND IT. I WILL BE ABLE TO RETELL IT INTO MY OWN WORDS AND TO TELL THE LITTLE KIDS ABOUT IT TOO.



MATH:FOR MATH, MY GOAL IS TO LEARN ALL MY WEAKNESS WHICH IS TO MULTIPLY, SUBTRACT, DIVIDING AND ADDING THREE DIGIT NUMBERS AND DECIMALS. SO I COULD BE READY FOR COLLEGE.



WRITTEN LANGUAGE:IS TO ABLE TO FORM SENTENCES INTO PARAGRAPHS AND MAKE SURE WHAT I'M WRITING MAKES SENSE. SO PEOPLE WOULD WANT TO READ MY BOOK LOTS AND LOTS OF TIMES.



LEADERSHIP:MY LEADERSHIP GOAL IS TOBE ABLE TO LEAD A GROUP OR CLASS SO THEY CAN LEARN FROM EACH OTHER AND DO THE RIGHT THINGS EVEN FOR ME.



PHYSICAL EDUCATION(P.E):MY GOALS FOR P.E IS TO PLAY MORE SPORTS AND LEARN MORE ABOUT THAT SPORT BECAUSE I SOME TIMES DON'T LIKE PLAYING SPORTS AND I SOME TIMES DON'T LIKE LEARNING ABOUT THOSE SPORTS.



INQUIRY:FOR INQUIRY MY GOAL IS TO FOLLOW THE INQUIRY PROCESS AND THINK OF LOTS AND LOTS OF GOOD CHALLENGING TOPICS THAT THE CLASS WOULD WANT TO DO A RESEARCH ON. SO I CAN DO SOME THING TO HELP AND RESEARCH ABOUT THE TOPIC FIRST BEFORE I START TO DO SOME ACTION ABOUT.


REFLECTION...


My reflection for this term is that I've improved and moved up lots.I've moved up in my reading and math, and helping more people than I did before. How I improved in my reading nad math is because I was focusing hard and doing the right thing and staying on task. I like playing sports and doing atheletics. My favourite atheletic sport is high jump because I like jumping and not running or throwing. And it's gonna help me for next year so I could try and join some sports at college.